In this project, we have created our personal memoirs in both English and our native languages. To share our work, we have uploaded a written and oral version so that many people can enjoy our work!
The work presented is still in draft form, and we will continue to improve the quality of our work through the feedback and questions provided by readers/listeners! Please comment with compliments, suggestions and questions for us.
[All names have been changed to protect student privacy and all comments will be moderated by school staff.]
You did well but you should add more information about yourself
ReplyDeletecan you explain more about your family
You did well but there is no more information about yourself, your family and your home town.
ReplyDeleteCan you give detail about your family and your study.
You should add more information.
carlos more information in your school in pakistan and your friends and cousin and about your family
ReplyDeleteYour memoir is very nice but you should try more information
ReplyDeletei think you should try more information about your school,family,and your study