In this project, we have created our personal memoirs in both English and our native languages. To share our work, we have uploaded a written and oral version so that many people can enjoy our work!
The work presented is still in draft form, and we will continue to improve the quality of our work through the feedback and questions provided by readers/listeners! Please comment with compliments, suggestions and questions for us.
[All names have been changed to protect student privacy and all comments will be moderated by school staff.]
You did a good job but you still need more details.
ReplyDeleteCan you give more detail about your village.
Can you add sensory detail about your school.
I like that how you explain
ReplyDeletecan you explain about your friends in elementary school
i would suggest talk a little more about academics and what was hard about going to school here in the U.S.
ReplyDeleteYour story honestly is really funny! It is very different in a really good way! But give more more details about emotions and friends in elementary
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