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Leo Messi (Uzbekistan, Age 15): English 754
I am from Uzbekistan, city is Samarkand. In my family we are 6. My brother, my two sisters, my Mother, my father and I. I started to go to school in Uzbekistan I used to have a lot of friends for 8 years. But when I was young I went also for Two years in Russia with my mom because she found job there. After two years I want back to Uzbekistan. After I went back I started to go to school with my same friends. But after 1 year I went with my father in Korea and I stayed there for 2 years. I didn’t like Korea even the food. The only thing that I liked from Korea was the park. But my father understood that I didn’t like stay there so he told me to go back to Uzbekistan by myself. I stayed in Uzbekistan for 5 months. After 5 months my family decided to go to America. When I arrived to America my father’s friend came to meet us in the airport. The food is was a little different. I have to say that I like American food but not much. Actually I like more the food from my country. After I came to America I stayed 3 months at home. After 3 months I started to go in Middle school and one of my classmate, arabic girl, helped me so much. one with all the girls helped struck with a mate, they mate Kathy was great everything was perfect girl, man, they all I would agree with that one day I went to math class man did not know it was a busy one girl taught i see delicacy was his worst beautiful man with great skills I am in the city of Uzbekistan, Samarkand us 6 months, my brother, my sister in Mother and father has banned school Tal Frank, who was banned from biting man was thick with the adoption of their with me man who was ready with the class at all in the middle I left them with me was deep, and then I was 5 class Become ban after the letter was a good young man, my mother went to Russia, where he enjoyed 2 years he returned to Uzbekistan Than after another man went to school with the same friends school and then go to my father, who was 8 class bilader Korea came into his land with bad eating my father, my father Sales mania everywhere forbidden to man, then I'm bored, my dad said after the man go IN Uzbekistan father came and said hi man Mother lovely man said to them, ban them said 1 year later to win a manic mother Girish card in American we all ride home in America came to us nephew us when we was different air and food vopshem others was, after all did not like the food mania brother, has been banned from the school I went to school the day was the first day of school was prohibited, one with all the girls helped struck with a mate, they mate Kathy was great everything was perfect girl, man, they all I would agree with that one day I went to math class man did not know it was a busy one girl taught to see delicacy was his worst beautiful man with great skills We then went to Miami and went to town recently with a friend prohibited laziz Nayef Saturday was delicious, Saturday saw all the animals Saturday swimming became quite awhile after more than 3 days, Saturday was all black Bach play in soccer, namely evribadi soccer and then came back in New York, came to rest in front of the house, and then made fun of Bach composed picnic Saturday was all the more Bach uyerdayam the end of the soccer evribadi thank you …,,, ******...,,,(‘_’) (‘_’)
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I like your story and I would like to tell you to check your grammers.
ReplyDeletei like your story but you have to fix your grammers
ReplyDeleteI like your story but you should add more details about your country and capitalize when you start a new sentence and capitalize "I"
ReplyDeleteI like your memoir a lot. However, I think you should cut your sentences. Make them shorter and break the memoir into paragraphs. You should add a little more detail. Good job!
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