In this project, we have created our personal memoirs in both English and our native languages. To share our work, we have uploaded a written and oral version so that many people can enjoy our work!
The work presented is still in draft form, and we will continue to improve the quality of our work through the feedback and questions provided by readers/listeners! Please comment with compliments, suggestions and questions for us.
[All names have been changed to protect student privacy and all comments will be moderated by school staff.]
You could even write about your past life.
ReplyDeleteYou have to add sensory detail in your memoir.
Can you add detail about your Home and family.
Can you give more information about Islamabad.
misbah god job and your speak loudly
ReplyDeleteMisbah you did really good job but you should used past tens
ReplyDeleteMisbah you did really good job but you should used past tens
ReplyDeletei would suggest talk a little slower and also please talk about how life and academics were here in the U.S.
ReplyDeleteyou did a really good job! It is very good, and you are talking at a good pace!
ReplyDeletemisbah i like your story plz can you give more information about pakistan
ReplyDeleteMisbah I like your story plz can you give more information.
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