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I’m came from China. In China I had many friends and some time we went outside to play with my friends. I went to school in China in school I learned many stuff I like. I school learn computer in school. In China, teachers were very rigid. If you talked in class they would made you stand in a black cupboard for ten minutes. In the cupboard I only saw black around and it feels hot. Inside the cupboard and you can hear people was talking at outside the cupboard. So you would stop talked to others, but some teachers was nice they did not made you stand in a black cupboard they only went up to you and talked to you. In China when the parents meet teachers came you had to go school or they will just get your points off from your report card.
I always try be good at school, when I do good in school my teacher will give me a awards that made me happy and my mom will be happy too. Also when I did good work at school my mom will cooked many food it taste good, and she will buy toy for me when I was little I had many toys that also made me happy, but when I did bad at school my mom will talked to me she tells me that did well at school can made you had a better life when you grow up.
When I was eight years old. I went to vacation with my family one day.In the vacation we reservation room in a hostel, in the room there was foods, life appliances, and computers and i was so surprise, and happy. In the vacation we go to amusement park, ocean, and zoo. i also meet some people in the amusement park that i know in school. in the amusement park i play ferris wheel and i play many stuff but i don’t know what it call. i have acrophobia so i’m don’t like ferris wheel.
In 2011, I came to US by travel a big airplane, the reason I came to US because my father and my sister was live in USA. When I came to airport my auntie get me a billow that we can use in the airplane. All day long I was in airplane so I sleep in the airplane. when I open my eye I saw clouds and mountains out the window, after 1-3 hours I’m in US when I got down the airplane I saw my father was waiting for us. When I got out the airport we ride the car for 1 hour, and then I got home, when I got home I thought about that why the house was too small. I asked my mom, my mom tell me that people came to US was not for beatified they were came for work and saved moneys and my father went to work and we went to a restaurant to ate when we done we went home and I was happy. My first day of school was good because my teachers didn’t hit people I got surprise because in China is not like this your teachers can hit you and they don’t have to go to jail,but in US if you teachers hit you they had to go to jail. I don’t understand any English in first day of my school. In the school I have 7 period every day of school is like 50 minutes, and I have lunch in school in china you have to pay for lunch if you want to eat or you went home to eat and you came back again in afternoon, every lunch is in 5th period and the lunch is like about 40 minutes when we finish lunch we can went out to play.
You write many different thing about your school , but you need to fix your grammer and write more about your friend and country culture.
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